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NanoWrimo 2009 Begins!

Sunday, November 1st, 2009

Nanowrimo 2009 has begun and to-be novelists all over the world are busy typing away–trying to get those 50,000 words in before the end of November.

I am sort of cheating as I am working on the fantasy novel I have been writing for over a year, but if I stick to my word counts, it’s highly possibly I might actually finish it. Wouldn’t that be amazing? I hope so!

You can follow my word count progress at:
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/521426.

Please be aware that on the first day of NanoWrimo, the site is experiencing some sluggishness!

I am actually headed out the door to START writing now, but I did upload my novel’s summary, excerpt, and a word cloud of my progress so far. Please cheer me on! And if you are a writer, join in! Anyone from the Seattle area, especially the Eastside, is encouraged to join me in work sessions. I am going to be at Starbucks tonight, roughly from 5-11pm.


Synopsis:
A castle servant girl PERIEL partners with the unscrupulous magician TANTALVADOR to save the one she loves, the noble prince ANDAR, from a soul-destroying curse.

Meanwhile, Prince Andar’s bride-to-be, the witch-princess RESLYN, targets Periel out of vengeance, while the dark wizard ARIMAN, who cursed Andar, seeks to overthrow the kingdom.

To have a hope in the world, Periel must learn to unlock magic of her own. But things are complicated when the wrong man falls in love with her.

Excerpt:
The magician had said exactly three things to her since their bargain: that she was unforgivably unsociable, that her temperament was reprehensibly moderate, and that she had an ‘obscene fastidiousness for the arranging of objects’.

My Trip to New York City

Sunday, November 1st, 2009

Hello world!

I decided to go to New York City for the first time on an impromptu weekend vacation. I’m so glad I went. I love this city. Something about the lights, the variety, and a sense of being somewhere where something is always happening. Of course it is also the publishing capital of the world and the home of many literary agents as well as the headquarters of many agencies and corporate giants.

Two of my loves are writing and social media. Seeing New York tickled both of these. In conversations with locals I got to talk about what I do, what I think social media means, and where I think it is going to go. Meanwhile, I am strolling up and down Broadway oogling the shows, culture, and entertainment.

I made sure to eat a hot dog from a stand, pizza, and a bagel. I also had two fancy dinners. Perilla (restaurant of a Bravo Top Chef contestant) was WONDERFUL.

As I enjoyed myself I thought about my career as a writer. I am thankful that I think about writing everyday, that I believe in myself, and that I work as hard as hard and humbly as I do. I suppose some people might find New York intimidating but I found it inspiring. It really made me want to work hard.

Thank you, New York! I hope to visit you again soon.

Why Writers Must Know Grammar

Wednesday, June 10th, 2009

It surprises me how many aspiring fiction writers don’t know a thing about grammar. The majority can’t identify the eight Parts of Speech, explain when you would use ‘well’ instead of ‘good,’ or understand why you shouldn’t end a sentence with a prepositional phrase.

I am not a grammarian myself. There are many rules about language structure that I don’t understand, despite having studied grammar independently, taken a few college courses, and taught it to children. I forget, for instance, the difference between an embedded clause and a relative clause (or embedded relative clauses?). I could use more practice in sentence diagramming. I sometimes mix up British and American usage.

Like many writers, I make mistakes. There are also things that I have learned to do incorrectly. For example, it wasn’t too long ago that I broke myself of the habit of using an ellipsis (…) instead of a dash (–) to indicate an interruption. For some reason known only to my muse, I occasionally write her when I mean him or him when I mean her, not because I’m confused by the difference, but by some sort of defunct muscle memory.

My point is that I need a copy editor and a proofreader as much as anyone. However, I do not expect a copy editor to do my writing for me. I know the basics, and I make an effort to always be learning and practicing.

There are many writers who know next to nothing about grammar or punctuation. That’s okay as we all have to start somewhere. However, it is a problem when writers believe that they don’t need to know grammar, either because they don’t recognize how difficult their writing is to understand or because they assume it is the job of a copy editor to fix their mistakes.

Let’s dispel this myth! If a publishing house wants to print your manuscript, an editor will help you make your story better, a copy editor will go line-by-line through your work, and a proof reader will make sure all is set for print, but it is not the responsibility of any of these professionals to teach you how to write.

A writer who cannot form coherent sentences is not going to get published. At the very least, every writer should know the basics of grammar and punctuation. You should know all the Parts of Speech, what they mean, and how to identify them in a sentence. You should understand what a sentence is and how it differs from a clause. You should know how to use all punctuation marks, including commas, semicolons, dashes, apostrophes and ellipses correctly. Otherwise, your manuscript is going to resemble a garbled mess that no one will want to wade through in order to find the story!

At least have a grammar book! Everyone should. It wouldn’t hurt to have several.

Not all grammar books are stuffy and hard to understand. The basic ones are like encyclopedias, but some are written like narratives and can be entertaining. The best grammar books (in my opinion) are a mix of the two and explains the whens and whys with really clear and interesting examples.

My favorite grammarian is Grammar Girl, or Mignon Fogarty, who was one of the first people I started following on Twitter. I love her because she responds to my questions. She has a podcast and a best selling book. In fact, you can win a copy of Grammar Girl’s Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing by entering this contest at Writing the Cyber Highway (ends June 13, 2009).

You can keep up with Grammar Girl in the following ways:

* On Twitter: @GrammarGirl
* Subscribe to Grammar Girl’s daily tip newsletter.
* Visit Grammar Girl’s website and listen to the podcast!

Writing is a craft. If you are serious about writing, you need to understand the structure of your discipline. A writer who ignores grammar is like a chef who ignores ingredients. You need to understand the elements of language if you are going to tell a story you expect anyone to read! Doing so will not only make you a better writer, but also make the process of writing more enjoyable.

Beloved Fantasy Author David Eddings Passes Away at 77

Sunday, June 7th, 2009

I learned via Michael Pinto on Twitter and an article from The Guardian that David Eddings has passed away. He was 77.

David Eddings is a fantasy author most famous for the epic fantasy series the Belgariad, which was five novels in length, and its sequel the Mallorean, which was also five novels. He wrote high epic fantasy at a time when it was an underserved genre. His works were inspired by The Lord of the Rings, and followed a similar (now common) story outline of a simple farmboy whose is really a prince and whose destiny was to become a sorcerer, take the throne of his kingdom, and defeat an evil god according to an ancient prophesy. Of course, Garion wants nothing to do with any of that.

The story had several lovable elements, most of which were in the characters. The sorcerer Belgarath plays a role similar to Gandalf in Lord of the Rings, but doesn’t take himself as seriously and sometimes needs firm reminders from his daughter Polgara (also a sorceress) not to be a scoundrel. One of the most memorable characters is Silk, a thief who is the funniest character in the cast and also the most disreputable (but in a good way). One of my personal favorites was CeNedra, the princess destined to be Garion’s bride, who is spoiled, obsessed with vanity and wealth, but comes to love poor farmboy Garion (much to her dismay) without knowing he is her betrothed, and upon accepting the situation shapes up to be a better person in order to support him.

The Belgariad was a lovable story, as evidenced by the fact that I can recall it so well having not touched it in over ten years.

Of course it wasn’t perfect, and David Eddings did borrow a lot from Tolkien, which is obvious to anyone who has read both series, but he made his stories unique by poking fun at tropes in the fantasy genre, writing viciously funny dialogue (his characters were consistently irreverant toward powerful people), and providing a fantasy world rich in medieval elements Tolkien didn’t mess with, such as knights, mythological gods, hunts, economics, and politics. The books’ themes also included a slew of commentary about the relationships between men and women, which made them funny and more relatable for young girls. They were a delight when I was reading them in middle school.

David Eddings grew up in the Puget Sound area of Washington State, which is also where I grew up and live today. According to The Guardian, Eddings saw himself as a story teller who hoped to inspire reading in young people:

Eddings was always delighted, he said, to hear that he’d turned non-readers into readers. “I look upon this as perhaps my purpose in life,” he said in 1997. “I am here to teach a generation or two how to read. After they’ve finished with me and I don’t challenge them any more, they can move on to somebody important like Homer or Milton.”

I did move on (to both Homer and Milton), but I still have some of Eddings’ books (the exact same ones I read in middle school) on my shelves. They are in poor shape. I read Eddings before I read Tolkien, and although he was not the author who inspired me to read and love fantasy (that was CS Lewis in the third grade, followed by DragonLance in the fifth grade), he was one of the authors whose work I reread three or four times, carried around with me, and occasionally lost in that space between the bed and the wall. I haven’t read any of his work in awhile, and doubtless I would find much to critque in his stories (I vaguely remember thinking the Mallorean was too similar to the Belgariad), but he will always be one of my most nostalgic and beloved authors.

David Eddings, you touched a generation of young fantasy readers. You were one who inspired me to write. You will be greatly missed.

Review of the Palm Pre: Why I Switched to Sprint!

Saturday, June 6th, 2009

Today, June 6, 2009, I bought the Palm Pre mobile smartphone from Sprint. I work in social media as an analyst and write for a living, so it’s really about time I jumped on the band wagon and got a decent phone (yes, I can blog from it!).

I live in Bellevue, Washington. My local Sprint store sold out of the Palm Pre at 9:05 am. They opened at 8:00am. I was the second to last person to get one of these awesome phones! Yes, I had to stand in line, but not very long; maybe 20 minutes. I didn’t camp out or anything.

I spent another hour in the store playing with it.

The Palm Pre is my first smartphone and I am very excited about it! In fact, it is my first ‘cool’ phone. My previous phone was a Samsung A707 which I bought in 2007 (it came out in 2006). The exciting feature with that phone was that it was ‘flat’ and fit in my pocket and had a color screen (hawt). After having it for about a year, I cracked the front screen by stepping on it (oops). Since then it has been occasionally unreliable (unless the reason for that is AT&T’s network suffering from iPhone over-usage).

Here is a picture of my old phone:

My old Samsung on Twitpic

I didn’t get a better phone. Affordable phones required new contracts and cool phones required data plans at $30 added to my already too-high AT&T bill. AT&T has been raping me. I pay over $75 a month on the LOWEST voice plan ($39.99) they have. I don’t use my phone to talk much. I use 0-10 Anytime Minutes a month and have several thousand rollover minutes stored up for no purpose. I do text message, though, so I bought text messaging for an additional $20 a month. This brings my bill to $60 without taxes and other fees (the grand total being $75).

I was sold unlimited text messaging. I didn’t even know they had other options. It is ridiculous because I don’t text that much and any sales person should have seen that when looking at my bills. I even complained about it when I bought my last phone. They could have informed me that there was an option of 200 text messages for $5 a month, which is too little, or 1500 text messages for $15 a month, which is too high, but they didn’t. If AT&T had made an effort to set me up with the best plan for me and make me happy, I might have felt better about the whole thing, but as it was, I felt they were just out to sell me as high as they could.

It doesn’t upset me, but it’s not loyalty-inspiring.

They could have informed me at ANY time how they could SAVE ME money on a different plan. All they have to do is build a robot to look at people who regularly aren’t using all their minutes or text messages and inform those people that better options are available. This would have created brand loyalty for me.

As it is, we have a business relationship. My contract with AT&T is up in three weeks and I feel no reason not to go elsewhere.

So I am moving to Sprint! While I was cruising plans on their website, a representative contacted me via chat. Cool. I talked to a real person (though that person is probably not named ‘Jessica’ despite the IM label). This sales rep helped me figure out that I could cut my regular bill in HALF with a Sprint plan if I did not want a smartphone. With a smartphone, I could still save $30 a month on service over comparable plans offered by AT&T or Verizon. I haven’t heard of any Network Coverage complaints for Sprint in my area, and the word on the street is that customer service from Sprint has soared to fangasm amazing since David Hesse became CEO and presumably fired all the surly, rude customer reps that worked for Sprint a few years ago. I was sold.

So, my dear Sprint, as you have addressed and corrected your problems, and because you have been good to me, you have won yourself at least one new customer who will blog your praises to other potential customers.

Also, you have a HOT phone.

I shall now gush out a review of the Palm Pre.

The Palm Pre – Sprint’s Hawt New Phone

The Sprint Palm Pre  on Twitpic

I decided I wanted a Palm Pre while looking for a boring phone to replace my current boring phone with a better rate plan. I read about the Palm Pre while researching Sprint (against all competitors) and couldn’t believe the phone was coming out at the end of the week I happened to be looking for a new phone. I had wanted a smart phone for awhile. I had considered the iPhone because of the spiffy apps, but I wanted a keyboard. And lo and behold! The Palm Pre has both.

It should be obvious that I’m not the most knowledgeable person when it comes to mobile technology, but as a writer I do my research and I can tell you why so far I think the Palm Pre is awesome.

As a writer, I need a phone I can use to write to the web. BlackBerry has been tempting for years, but I wasn’t motivated to get one because of the price tag. Also, I had to ask myself: ‘is email really all that important to me?’ Then the iPhone came out in all its sexiness. I like the iPhone’s pretty touch screen and the lovely apps, but I still wanted a physical keyboard, and the iPhone was also very expensive.

When I learned about the Palm Pre, I did even more research. People have been buzzing about it for months.

The Palm Pre has been dubbed the ‘iPhone Killer.’ It is Palm’s first market-competitive phone in ten years. It is Sprint’s greatest hope. Here are the top ten things I like about the Palm Pre (in no particular order):

  1. It has a physical QUERTY keyboard
  2. It has a touch screen
  3. It has apps like the iPhone
  4. You can run multiple apps at a time (which you can’t on the iPhone)
  5. You can load and check multiple email addresses
  6. Service plans are cheaper with Sprint than competitors
  7. You can surf and post to websites and social media (including your blog)
  8. It has a music player and syncs with iTunes
  9. It is sleek and pretty
  10. It runs on a faster network than the iPhone and has better coverage (at least where I live)


Extra kicks: The Palm Pre comes with a USB charger as well as an outlet adapter. This means I can charge it on my laptop if I really need to (of course that would drain my laptop battery if I am not plugged in) as well as plug into an outlet. The Palm Pre also comes with earphones (albeit, not very comfortable, but good sound quality and I go through earphones like nobody’s business so I enjoy an extra pair!)

Drawbacks to the Palm Pre are minimal. I’ve noticed that sometimes I cancel out of applications without meaning to. The software may be oversensitive to touch, but it is just as likely user error as I am not used to the touch screen. The keyboard is also quite small, which has led some people to wish the Palm Pre also had a virtual keyboard like the iPhone, but I like the Palm Pre’s keyboard. I’ve had it a few hours and I am used to it already. I find physical keyboards to be much faster and easier than virtual keyboards.

Best of all is that the Pre Palm is with Sprint and therefore more affordable! I did a lot of research on Sprint before purchasing, so I can break it down for you. The best thing for me is that Sprint offers packaged service plans where you can reduce Voice minutes and still have unlimited text, media, messaging, and data. You can get unlimited voice, 900 Anytime Minutes, or 450 Anytime Minutes. This plan set-up is ideal for me as I don’t talk on the phone all that much and would be overpaying for Voice with other carriers.

I have the Everything Plan with 450 voice minutes for $69.99. This includes unlimited weekend minutes, unlimited evening minutes that start at 7:00 pm, unlimited mobile-to-mobile minutes, and unlimited messaging and data. This allows me to use the phone less for talking and more for texting, web surfing, and writing, which is what I really want to do. Woot! If I did want unlimited talking, the total would be $99.99 for Sprint’s Simply Everything Plan, which is still a lot cheaper than competitor prices.

Some people have reservations about Sprint as a carrier. I researched this too. For coverage, as with ALL carriers, reliability with Sprint can depend on where you live. Network coverage with Sprint is great in Seattle. It is great most places, I hear, especially populated places, but of course YMMV. I am not sure, but it may be less reliable out of the United States (AT&T is said to be the best out of the country because it runs off of a GSM network as opposed to CDMA). Generally, Sprint has great nationwide coverage.

As far as customer service is concerned, Sprint used to have a very poor reputation, but since Dan Hesse became CEO, customer service has changed a lot. The poor customer service rating Sprint received in the past was a motivating factor for me to change to Sprint, not because I want poor customer service, but because I know they are concerned about that now and working very hard to address it. This signals to me that I can expect great customer service from Sprint. So far it has been everything I hoped!

For people who do not want to switch to Sprint, the Palm Pre will probably become available to other carriers sometime around Christmas (I heard 6 months). I don’t know the details, though. Still, I think you will be paying more with other carriers (AT&T and Verizon) unless they revise their price plans in order to be competitive.

Well that’s all I got! All I can say in conclusion is that I love this phone, and that I am thrilled to be able to write, read, edit, and respond to comments to my blog from my Palm Pre mobile from wherever I am at!

The One Proven Way to Beat Writer’s Block

Tuesday, January 27th, 2009

Writer’s Block is a mysterious, almost mystical ailment that affects writers. It has struck every writer I know at least once. It strikes grad school students suffering through the hashing out that final term essay. It strikes professional copywriters sweating over something as small (but significant) as a tag line. It consistently strikes writers engaged in a long projects, such as a novel, screenplay, or an ongoing blog or column.

There’s only one known method for beating writer’s block that has ever worked for me, but first, a little information:

What is Writer’s Block?

Described briefly, writer’s block is the blockage that occurs when writers are unable to put down words, or unable to put down words they like. There are three types I am aware of:

1. Being unable to put down ideas (staring at the cursor, sometimes for hours, while writing nothing)
2. Being unable to find the words to convey ideas (always researching and looking in the dictionary or thesaurus)
3. Writing ideas that seem terrible to you so you constantly throw away, revise, or start new projects (like a hamster running in a wheel).

For some, writer’s block degenerates to a procrastination problem where writing is not even attempted. Writers suffering from severe writer’s block meander throughout the day (or week, or month, or year) thinking about the writing they are not doing and justifying to themselves how they are unable to find time, motivation, or materials to do it.

(Note: There IS a case to be made for taking breaks from writing. There is also a case to be made for not writing a particular work for a time. However, if you have something you know you want to write and your problem is just not being able to do it, then you are suffering from writer’s block.)

Writer’s block is soul killing for a writer. It makes a writer feel lazy and unproductive. It makes them feel uncreative and uninspired. Overtime, it can damage confidence, credibility, productivity, and profitability.

Why Writer’s Experience Writer’s Block

Writers experience writer’s block for a variety of reasons. Sometimes there are serious life issues that put writing on hold, but most of the time the problem is fixable. Writers complain about being abandoned by their muse, about being too busy, about not being able to find the right words, about being “bogged” down or “thrown off” their routine, and a variety of other things, but most of these are excuses. When viewed from a distance (be honest now) the “phenomenon” of writer’s block, despite varying circumstances, has the same face:

Lack of confidence

Writer’s block happens when writers stop writing. The reason writers stop writing is because they don’t trust themselves. This lack of self-trust can take multiple forms depending on the writer, but it is all the same thing: Writers don’t trust that they are good enough writers, that they can make the time to write, that they don’t have new enough ideas, that they don’t have the right style, that they don’t have the right words, that they can’t meet the deadlines, that no one will like their work, etc.

Writer’s block can happen to anyone. It affects the most successful, productive, and confident of writers as well as the inexperienced, developing, and unsure writers. In fact, writers with a lot of confidence can suffer more from self doubt than inexperienced writers simply because the expectation they hold for themselves (and others for them) is so much higher. Confident writers panic at the thought of not writing perfectly. This panic can lead to time wasters: unnecessary research, reorganization, restrategization, advice-seeking, break taking, blog reading (ahem), or any activity other than writing.

I froze up recently because I heard too much about word count in a conversation at a writers’ group. My writing tends to err toward LONG, detailed, and developed from the get-go. I already know this, but of course I wanted it to be perfect and I realized I couldn’t possibly finish the story I was telling in the word count allotted for a first novel (120k tops). As a result, I found myself unable to move a scene forward. However, the solution to this is actually pretty simple.

I need to finish the scene, and then the rest of the story, and worry about word count later. Regardless of how long it turns out to be, the story needs to be complete. THEN I can revise or entirely rewrite it to be shorter. This is very doable. I was a whiz at writing overlong college essays and trimming them to the proper page requirement. It’s a lot of work, but I’ve always enjoyed the revision process. It stimulates the logical, organized, business part of my brain when the creative part is all tuckered out. You just have to be pragmatic enough about your own work to feel no qualms about hacking it to pieces once it’s “finished.”

For those writers out there who find themselves getting choked up on their work due to this (issues of “perfection”) or any other kind of Writer’s Block, I have this to say: The first draft, no matter how good you are as a writer or how conceptually brilliant or outlined the idea, will NEVER be perfect. Never. Creative writing is a process.

The one proven solution to defeating writer’s block is to WRITE.

Think about it metaphorically: “blockage” is a good description. Writer’s block is like a clogged drain. There are two ways to get rid of a clog–to open up the innards of the piping and remove the gunk, or to flush it down and out with a strong dissolvant.

Writing works the same way, and both solutions require writing. “Removing the gunk” might mean changing direction in your story (or whatever you are writing) by DEFYING all the prep work you did and trying something else, such as writing a scene from a new point of view, or taking the story in a different direction than you intended. “Flushing” is the process of forcing yourself to just write onward.

Only one thing is for sure: sitting around waiting for “inspiration” isn’t going to finish your novel. Inspiration comes and goes. No matter how you look at it, you eventually have to WRITE through a block.

Fortunately, there are some tips and “treatments” to make this more likely to happen. If you find yourself doing your damnest, but are still being routinely defeated by that impish blinking cursor, stay tuned for my next blog post: Top five methods to help super charge your productivity.

About a Writer - Writing Blog Launched By New Year

Thursday, December 18th, 2008

Welcome to www.aboutawriter.com

About a Writer is an aspiring writer’s blog. It doesn’t really exist quite yet, but it is scheduled to be redesigned and launched by the beginning of 2009.

About a Writer is my professional blog. It is about–you guessed it–writing.

What kind of a writer am I? Well, as it turns out, being a writer means being many things: a researcher, a marketer, an editor, a storyteller, a wordsmith, a business professional, a networker, and nowadays an SEO, copywriter, and social media expert and analyst.

I wanted to be a writer since before I learned how to write–four or five years old, I would say, (but you can ask my mother). I was a master of “Make Believe” and I was never more popular than in those magical years between 1st and 3rd grade.

What I have chosen to blog about is writing: writing as a profession, as an industry, as a marketable skill, and as my personal dream.

I write professionally now as a business writer, but my hope is to finish my first manuscript by March 2009. In this writing blog, I will writing about that experience in addition to sharing what I know about writing as a craft.